Showing posts with label Week Four. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week Four. Show all posts

Thursday, September 12, 2019

Week Four Story Laboratory

For this week's Story Lab, I decided to explore the website "Writers Write." Immediately, the post that jumped out at me was "20 Myths to Use as Writing Prompts" because, obviously, it fits really well with this class!

The article begins by defining what a writing prompt is (a word/phrase/idea/etc. designed to spark a writer's creativity and direct their writing, especially for writing exercises) and what a myth is (a traditional story including superbeings/ancestors/heroes, often to explain some kind of natural phenomenon). It goes on to list twenty myths that could serve as interesting writing prompts.

When I started reading this article, I expected it to list specific, pre-existing myths, such as the stories of the Greeks, or any of the things we've been reading this semester. Instead, it gives specific circumstances and prompts the writer to create a myth around them. For example, "Write a myth to explain why the sky is blue." Although this wasn't what I expected, it was still interesting to me, so I'll include a couple of my favorites here:
"Write a myth to explain why leaves change color."
"Write a myth to explain how bees got their stings."
"Write a myth to explain why birds fly and fish swim."

Despite not being what I thought the article would be, I still feel as though these could be interesting writing prompts for a story, and I may take them into account for a later story for this class!

Another article I explored was "5 Instances When You Need to Tell." This one caught my attention because, in every writing course I've taken -- and I'm an English Writing minor, so I've taken several -- the concept of showing versus telling in storytelling has been a permeating subject. Generally, of course, it is considered better to show and not tell, which means that you should let your reader see what's happening through action/dialogue/scene/etc., rather than just describing everything to them.

The five instances it lists are when you need to gloss over unnecessary conversations/connect scenes, when you need to report events/gloss over unnecessary characters, when you need to show time passing, when you want to focus on emotion but can't actually show it at that time, and when you want to add backstory. Of course, none of these are hard and fast rules, as, for example, sometimes you might want to show backstory by way of flashbacks, or something along those lines. But essentially the idea is that sometimes, if you try to show every tiny conversation and every passing character, the reader will get kind of bogged down with all that detail and it will distract from the actual story, so telling/summarizing can help you move past some of the extraneous stuff without it feeling disjointed or unclear.

Fountain Pen Writing Photo by Pixabay

Wednesday, September 11, 2019

Week Four Reading Notes Part B - Homer's Iliad

Source story: The Iliad by Homer (retold by Alfred J. Church)


  • "The Rousing of Achilles"
    •  The Greeks and the Trojans fight over the body of Patroclus, and Hector puts on the armor of Achilles, which angers Zeus. Achilles's two immortal horses weep for the death of Patroclus, but Zeus bids them leave so that they won't be taken by Hector too. Finally, the Greeks send Antilochus to tell Achilles of Patroclus's death.
  • "The Rousing of Achilles (cont.)"
    • Achilles is heartbroken by the news, and his mother offers to get him new armor from Hephaestus to wear into battle to defeat Hector in vengeance, although she tells him that when Hector dies, he will soon die, too. In the meantime, he yells across the trench and Athena makes his voice terrifying, so the Trojans fall back and the Greeks recover the body. Then Hera makes the sun set early so the sad day will end. Hector says he will meet Achilles in battle.
  • "The Slaying of Hector"
    • With his new arms, Achilles rejoins the Trojans in the fight and nearly overtakes the city, but Apollo interferes and saves the Trojans. Priam calls to Hector, begging him to come inside the city gates so that Achilles will not kill him.
  • "The Slaying of Hector (cont.)"
    • Hector weighs his options and decides to stand against Achilles, but at the last moment is terrified and flees. They run around the city three times, and the gods discuss whether or not to help Hector, but they decide against it (though Apollo attempts to help him anyway by helping him run). Finally Athena tells Achilles to catch his breath and she will make Hector come to him.
  • "The Slaying of Hector (end)"
    • Athena pretends to be Hector's brother and tricks him into facing his death at the hands of Achilles. Hector begs Achilles to send his body back to his father and mother, but after Achilles kills him, he drags his body back to the Greeks behind his chariot. Andromache is heartbroken when she finds out.
  • "The Ransoming of Hector"
    •  Achilles has the body of Hector drug around his friend's grave daily, but finally the gods tell him he must sell it back to the Trojans. So Zeus sends Hermes in disguise to guide King Priam with all his treasures unseen to the tent of Achilles, where the gods have made Hector's body remain unblemished.
  • "The Ransoming of Hector (cont.)"
    • Achilles agrees to ransom the body of Hector, and after eating together and agreeing on a nine-day truce between their armies for the burial and mourning of Hector, Priam sneaks away in the night, guided by Hermers again, with his son's body, to avoid getting caught by the Greeks in their own camp. They are able to bury Hector well and nobly.
"Achilles Dragging the Body of Hector Around Troy" Mezzotint after G. Hamilton

Tuesday, September 10, 2019

Week Four Reading Notes Part A - Homer's Iliad

Source story: The Iliad by Homer (retold by Alfred J. Church)


  • "How the War with Troy Began"
    • The king of Sparta had a beautiful daughter named Helen, who married Menelaus. Menelaus became king, and Paris, prince of Troy, carried off Helen and quite a bit of treasure. All the men of Sparta had agreed before Helen had married that, whomever she married, they would come together to get her back should this exact situation arise. So for nine years they attacked Troy but could not get through the walls, and they began to pillage nearby cities.
  • "The Quarrel"
    • The god Apollo rains death upon the Greeks because they stole a daughter of his priest for Agamemnon, and refused to return her. A prophet tells Agamemnon he must not only return her, but give up some of his spoils as well. He refuses, and he and Achilles get into an argument about it. Achilles threatens to leave, and Agamemnon bids him go, but says he will take Achilles' portion of the spoils as his own. Achilles prepares to slay him, but Athena stays his hand, telling him to wait and Agamemnon's actions will bring their own consequences. So he says his final words and lets it be.
  • "The Quarrel (cont.)"
    • Agamemnon takes the girl who was given to Achilles to replace the girl he had to return to the priest (who prays and stops the plague). Achilles is kind to the heralds who unwillingly come to fetch her, and she goes to Agamemnon against her will. Then Thetis (daughter of the sea) hears Achilles weeping and agrees to go to Zeus for him when Zeus returns from a feast and convince Zeus to make the Greeks flee before the Trojans, so that Agamemnon will miss Achilles's help and realize that he has wronged him.
  • "What Thetis Did for her Son"
    • Thetis convinces Zeus (against his better judgment and much to the anger of Hera) to make the Trojans beat the Greeks in battle at least for awhile to do honor to Achilles. So Zeus sends a Dream to Agamemnon to convince him to go into battle against the Trojans right away without Achilles.
  • "Hector and Andromache"
    • Prince Hector of Troy comes in from the battle to convince Paris to come fight. He asks his mother to make an offering to Athena to ask for her help, but Athena rejects them. Paris agrees to come to the fight, and Hector goes to search for his wife and child to say goodbye to them in case he dies.
  • "Hector and Andromache (cont.)"
    • Hector and Andromache talk about what will become of them; he tries to comfort her, for she says that Achilles has killed all her family, so Hector is the only family she has now. Hector prays that his son will grow up to be a great warrior, then tells Andromache not to worry, because he will only die if it his fate, and no one can escape fate anyway. Then he and Paris rejoin the war.
  • "Embassy to Achilles"
    • Ulysses, Phoenix, and Ajax visit Achilles to try to convince him to come back and help, because without him the Greeks are losing. They feast together. Agamemnon has sent with them all kinds of gifts as an apology for his behavior, and Ulysses accuses Achilles of being too proud and being the reason for so many Greek men dying.
  • "Embassy to Achilles (cont.)"
    • Achilles rejects Agamemnon's gifts and says he will not help him. Instead, he plans to return to his own country and settle down with a wife. He tells that his mother Thetis told him to choose between life (if he returns to Phthia, he will grow old but not be famous) and fame (if he attacks Troy, he will die). He asks Phoenix to join him and encourages Ulysses and Ajax to go to their own homes and avoid Troy, because it is "dear to Zeus."
  • "The Deeds and Death of Patroclus"
    • Patroclus, Achilles's companion, convinces Achilles to allow him to lead Achilles's people into battle in his stead, wearing his armor, so that the Trojans will retreat a little and give the Greeks some breathing room. Achilles relents, but tells Patroclus not to get cocky and approach the wall, but to stop fighting after saving the ships from burning.
  • "The Deeds and Death of Patroclus (cont.)"
    • Patroclus stops the burning of the ships but (shockingly!) forgets Achilles's warning and pushes towards the wall of Troy, slaying Trojans as he goes. He kills the Trojan hero Sarpedon, who calls out with his dying breath to Glaucus, asking him not to let the Greeks take his body.
  • "The Deeds and Death of Patroclus (end)"
    • Patroclus tries to overtake the city but Apollo pushes him back, saying it is not for him or Achilles to do this. Hector fights Patrolus and wins, destroying the armor of Achilles and killing Patroclus.

"Achilles Against Hector" - From Nikos Karakasidis on Flickr